I really appreciated the historical references to Botticelli and Greco-Roman times, as they added credence to your arguments. You weren't consistent in your usage of redheads-sometimes you used "redheads", and sometimes you used "red heads". I thought you did a great imitation of Mair's style, and balanced out the negative and positive arguments. You summed up your essay well by owning up to being a "ginger" and being proud of it.
I really appreciated the historical references to Botticelli and Greco-Roman times, as they added credence to your arguments. You weren't consistent in your usage of redheads-sometimes you used "redheads", and sometimes you used "red heads". I thought you did a great imitation of Mair's style, and balanced out the negative and positive arguments. You summed up your essay well by owning up to being a "ginger" and being proud of it.
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